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The Fangirl

Long time geek, fangirl, mother, and reader. I've got a lot to say, you might not like it all, but it will be honest and hopefully helpful.

One night on a train

One night on a train - Kelsey Charisma Meh.This is the stranger on a train scenario. It gets right to the fucking, which is a plus in my book, but that's about the best I can say.There are numerous grammar and even a couple spelling errors. Not to mention the same tired sex descriptors used over and over again during the sex scene. There is nothing creative or new here. While this book is free, you could find better porn on Literotica.com. It's dirty porn, sure, and i have absolutely no problem with that. Bad writing and lame sex scenes that's hard for me to forgiven. Too bad. I've always loved the stranger on a train fantasy and it'd be nice to read a well written version of it.