Long time geek, fangirl, mother, and reader. I've got a lot to say, you might not like it all, but it will be honest and hopefully helpful.
I really want to like this story. The premise is so cool, and I LOVE the fact that this is a cast of People of Color in a fairytale!
However, this dialogue is making it hard to read, I want to edit it. I'm pushing through, because I love Jess and Dev.
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