Long time geek, fangirl, mother, and reader. I've got a lot to say, you might not like it all, but it will be honest and hopefully helpful.
I'm a little thrown by the use of the word "faggot." Not just that it's used, but how it's used in the story. I get the feeling the author isn't American, but is trying to use it in an American slang way which would make sense of the military setting. However, the usage is a little confusing.
Otherwise, I'm totally sucked into this story. I love both Cam and Garrett. I love the Faceless, and the slow reveal of what happened to Cam. This one sucked me in.