Long time geek, fangirl, mother, and reader. I've got a lot to say, you might not like it all, but it will be honest and hopefully helpful.
"Many Buffy fan writers were not present in the relatively small circle of posters at The Bronze in its heyday."
Um...then why did you spend the lionshare of this essay talking about The Bronze if it had no notable effect on or connection to Buffy fan fic writers?
Total word count: 3,373
Words spent on Buffy Fan Fiction: 447
Less than 15% of this essay is spent talking specifically about Buffy Fan Fiction.
In summation this essay was essentially...